Question

What else should i add to my suspense story?

Molly was on a morning run listening to music, going through a forest trail and was violently grabbed from behind and thrown into the trees. She didn't know what to do but sit there and shake. When she turned around no one was there. She tried contacting her best friend but there was no response. It was midnight and she suddenly felt a rush of wind over her body. “Who’s there” she said. There was no response. She decided to scream for help because at the moment that was all she could think of to do. When she screamed she heard and low pitch voice saying “ Come to me. I can save you.” She was to scared to move.

Answer 1

its really rushed, so i suggest slowing it down a bit and adding more descriptions :D. Just more adjectives.