Can someone please correct my writing!!!

Dave McLure asked May 16, 2022

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Dave McLure asked May 16, 2022

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Here you go! I did it pretty fas, you may want to look over it yourself. Have a wonderful day! :)

Serhat Sezer answered May 22, 2022

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