Answer:
This is good writing, but it is too repetitive, you repeat the same thing over and over. You are trying to make it more in depth, and try expressing that by saying something of the such: "When he nears me, butterflies burst in my stomach no matter how much I try and push them down." instead of repeating over and over, "he's my bully, I've got feelings. he's my bully, but I've got feelings."