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Write a

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About an
event that happened in
your life and use all the strategies

the strategies:
1- ideas and unity
2- organization and Coherence
3- Sentence variety
4- word Choice

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The most heartwarming event happened to me a few years ago. When I was (whatever your age was a few years ago), my uncle left for the military and I really missed him. We were really close because he visited the house often. Well, six months later my mom and dad came home early around the same time which was odd. They were cleaning the house and setting up the dinner table, and refused to tell me what was going on. Then some time later there was a knock on the door and when I opened it, I was astonished. It was my uncle, and he able to come and visit us. It was so wholesome and memorable eating dinner with him again, not knowing when I would see him again.
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