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Write a personal narrative about a hero in your life. The story should tell about an experience that shows why this person is a hero to you and what effect this person has had on your life.

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The hero in my life is my papa because one time i cut my arm bad and he made a story up. While he was fixing the cut on my arm and when the story over he was done and i did'nt ever know. He was done and he did more than once anytime i hurt myself he was there to help. Now and days i rarely see him but anytime i do i don't wait me and him are doing something ever time. No day was boring we made fires too. In three weeks i will see him again and were going on a hike. And after that I hope me or him can think of something else to do. I wish sometimes i could go back and relive threw those fun times. But me and him got so much more time to spend together. So what ever is on his list of thing to do i will always be there trying to help. More reasons why he’s my hero he work hard and yet still find time to spend with me and my brothers and sister and just because he face to face to me when we stand up. I still look up to him and always will even when he’s gone but I don’t want to think of that. Ha I remember when he beard made me itch. And we road around in his big truck going to park but this is just more reason he is my hero and I love him for that and I hope he know that.

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I have many wonderful people in my life but the hero in my life is my father. My father is my hero because is he someone that I look up to. There are some amazing qualities that he possesses that make him my hero. He is kind, caring, loving, honest, and brave. He has taught me that it is good to help others and be caring. He has taught me the importance of good behavior. He is an amazing person and he is my hero. Hero's are rare to come upon. For me to be born with one is the biggest accomplishment.

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I have many wonderful people in my life but the hero in my life is my father. My father is my hero because is he someone that I look up to. There are some amazing qualities that he possesses that make him my hero. He is kind, caring, loving, honest, and brave. He has taught me that it is good to help others and be caring. He has taught me the importance of good behavior. He is an amazing person and he is my hero. Hero's are rare to come upon. For me to be born with one is the biggest accomplishment.

I remember once we went to the beach and my father and I got ice cream. We went and watched the ocean waves. That was amazing. It calmed me down. I remember I was in fights at school fighting people who were bullying my sister. I was young and not very smart and fought them because I remember my dad always said "Never show weakness to your enemy." My sisters Enemy's were my enemies but I grew up and realized they would have never backed off if it wasn't for my father telling me what to do.

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for kids who dont have dads dont worry I dont either LOLOL

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