Here's a poem I wrote a few months ago called "At Rest" - I need honest opinions plz!!
A deep breath
A feeling of peace
The world is at rest
And so am I
Even though it’s been tough
Even though the clouds sometimes take over
Even though the world is sometimes at war with itself
I push through
And the sun is still shining
And the world is at rest
And so am I
Even if you only win a little
It’s the smaller victories that count the most
It’s the little things you do
It’s the single smile on a rainy day
That can bring change
I gave that smile today
When it was pouring outside
And now the world is at rest
And so am I
It may feel like forever
Since we’ve had a sunny day
But there’s always tomorrow
There’s always a chance to give a smile
To change one person’s life
Even just one person’s day
Because even if the outside world may be in battle
My inside world doesn’t have to be
My world can be at rest
And so can I