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Critique this please.


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User Cheny
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I’d say that it looks good & you have amazing talent. If I were you the background is plain but don’t put anything too crazy. You could add words or some sort of color that would go well with the colors already being presented. I’d also make the background smaller (like crop it to where there isn’t so much grey in the back) Other than that, amazing job! <3
User HeatfanJohn
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I like it. What would make it better though is if you added some sort of background. Other than that, it looks great!

User Moz Morris
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