Question

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Refer to the model essay to answer the following question: What is wrong with the following sentence? #2 Armand, on the other hand, has no interest at all in cowboy cards and seems to Jerry, who is acting like a big loser, to be growing more and more distant from him. “He had recently become a stranger to me in many ways,” Jerry notes (231). A) The writer uses slang, which is inappropriate in an academic essay B) The sentence is choppy and needs to be combined with the sentence before it C) The subject/verb agreement is incorrect D) The meaning of the sentence is unclear

Answer 1

A:The writer uses slang, which is inappropriate in an academic essay

Explanation: He uses the term 'Big loser' in the sentence, which not only is informal, but also poor to use in a academic essay. Also, I took the test and got this question right.