Question

Rewrite the paragraph, correcting each fragment and run-on.

This paragraph has 2 fragments and 3 run-ons to fix... 5 errors in all!


The camel is a large, strong desert animal, camels can travel great distances with little food or water. The camel carries its own food supply. On its back in the form of a hump. The camel's hump is a large lump of fat the lump provides energy when there is no food. Camels can run about ten miles per hour and they can travel as far as one hundred miles per day. They exhibit unpredictable behavior. May groan, spit, or kick.

Answer 1

The camel is a large, strong desert animal. Camels can travel great distances with little food or water. The camel carries its own food supply on its back in the form of a hump. The camel's hump is a large lump of fat that provides energy when there is no food. Camels can run about ten miles per hour and they can travel as far as one hundred miles per day. They exhibit unpredictable behavior. May groan, spit, or kick.