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Correct the following sentence

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When i looked at the roller coaster my heart dropped there was no way i was going on that thing ​

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The person above me is correct I double checked. :)
User Adib Faramarzi
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When I looked at the roller coaster, my heart dropped. There was no way I was going on that thing!