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(The amount of grammar and usage error’s today is astounding. Not to mention spelling. If I was a teacher, I’d feel badly that less and less students seem to understand the basic principals of good writing. Neither the oldest high school students nor the youngest kindergartner know proper usage. A student often thinks they can depend on word processing programs to correct they’re errors. Know way! Watching TV all the time, its easy to see why their having trouble. TV interferes with them studying and it’s strong affect on children has alot to due with their grades. There’s other factors, too, including the indifference of parents like you and I. A Mom or Dad often doesn’t know grammer themselves. We should tell are children to study hard like we did at they’re age and to watch less TV then their classmates.)

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It is pretty good a few grammar mistakes here and there but with a few tweaks it’ll be perfect
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The number of grammar and usage errors today is astounding. Not to mention spelling. If I was a teacher, I’d feel badly that fewer and fewer students seem to understand the basic principles of good writing. Neither the oldest high school students nor the youngest kindergarteners know the proper usage. Students often think they can depend on word processing programs to correct their errors. No way! Watching TV all the time, it's easy to see why they are having trouble. TV interferes with their studying, and its strong effect on children has a lot to do with their grades. There are other factors, too, including the indifference of parents like you and me. A mom or dad often doesn’t know grammar themselves. We should tell our children to study hard like we did at their age and to watch less TV than their classmates.

CORRECTED GRAMMAR!

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The amount of grammar and usage error’s today is astounding. Not to mention spelling. If I was a teacher, I’d feel badly that less and less students seem to understand the basic principals of good writing. Neither the oldest high school students nor the youngest kindergartner know the proper usage. A student often thinks they can depend on word processing programs to correct they’re errors. Know way! Watching TV all the time, its easy to see why their having trouble. TV interferes with them studying and it’s strong affect on children has alot to due with their grades. There’s other factors, too, including the indifference of parents like you and I. A Mom or Dad often doesn’t know grammer themselves. We should tell are children to study hard like we did at they’re age and to watch less TV then their classmates.

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