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STAGEONE: Bunnik to Amsterdam

Our first cycling stage in Holland will be a 38mile (60km) ride from Bunnik to Amsterdam via Hilversum. Bunnik lies in the very centre of the Netherlands surrounded by rolling woodland meandering rivers and fields of tulips. For part of the journey we’ll be cycling alongside the ‘Crooked Rhine’ river. Admittedly the looping bends will slow us down a bit but in the later stages there are several long
straights on which we’ll be able to make up time.

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Our first cycling stage in Holland will be a 38 mile (60km) ride from Bunnik to Amsterdam via Hilversum. Bunnik lies in the very center of the Netherlands, surrounded by rolling woodland meandering rivers and fields of tulips. For part of the journey we’ll be cycling alongside the ‘Crooked Rhine’ river. Admittedly the looping bends will slow us down a bit, but in the later stages there are several long straights on which we’ll be able to make up time.