Question

Help me! what should i wright?

According to the article, "music and art helped me deal with the split-up of my family, as well as the several failed attempts to reunite us." and "Music and art became one of the most important parts of my life. especially when, this was also the year that my father passed away. The loss was very hard for me to deal with." This quote proves that art and music helped him physically. To add on they also helped him mentally! On the other hand, some may say to_____ . However,_______.

Answer 1

According to the article, "music and art helped me deal with the split-up of my family, as well as the several failed attempts to reunite us." and "Music and art became one of the most important parts of my life. especially when, this was also the year that my father passed away. The loss was very hard for me to deal with." This quote proves that art and music helped him physically. To add on they also helped him mentally! On the other hand, some may say that music didn’t help him through that experience but instead helped him mature and grow . However, many think that music is a great tool to cope with difficult/traumatic experiences throughout your life.

Answer 2

“On the other hand, some may say to not waste time on some music junk. However, music and art helped me most when i was feeling down.” This adds more details and some conflict of what people could or would have said.