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My poem :) please rate

If i ever fall in doubt
kiss me and remind me ,
why we fell in love.
If the wings of my blissful heart
lose their will to fly ,
Take me in your arms
And show me there is more.

Carry me
Don't leave me alone .

Forever is a long journey
And there , where we belong .
Carry me , in your heart
If the burden weighs you down ,
At least carry me in your thoughts .

Carry me , my love .

Because I will carry you
Until life tells me , no more.

I hope you like it

User Sddk
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5 votes

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Explanation: i d k

User Carolina Faedo
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Answer:

very eloquent I like it a lot

Step-by-step explanation:

your doing great im leaving for rn ill be back later today okay bye

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