Question

Rewrite the sentence with better figurative language.

1.) “He was as tall as a 6’3 tree.”

2.) “She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh like the sound a dog makes just before it throws up.”

Answer 1

1. He was as tall as the Eiffel tower, you could see him even over a electric train going 200 mph

Answer 2

1. The man was extraordinarily tall, I imagine two eighteen wheeled trucks could stand no taller than he, nor a looming oak tree for that matter.

2. She had a deep, hard laugh, one that reminded me of my grandfathers deep voice and deep low rumble of a car.