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This is for an intro for a short story; how does it sound?

When we're young we're taught the distance between a hero, a villain, good, evil, a savior, a lost cause. The only real difference is just who's telling the story. Individuals believe one side is enough to tell the whole story. Defining appearances not acknowledging the way a person's stands may disguise who they are. Not paying attention to the despair ones hiding in a desperate need of hope. Not scrutinizing how people want to change the world and how it perhaps needs changing. For some people, they understood both sides and were in between the threads of good and evil.

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Sounds cool. Like the vocabulary.
User Nikita Zhuikov
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Sounds good man very detailed
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