Question

Which of the following would be the most helpful comment on a peer

review sheet in the section on "balance" in writing?
I did notice that in paragraph 4, while you presented opposing viewpoints
(sources and your own logical ideas for opposition), the paragraph was
mostly evidence. You refuted your Smith source in one sentence; I would
work toward fully addressing every opposing concept fully for argument
strength and for balance, so that your voice is the loudest one.
You have sources sometimes that you don't explain very well; be sure to
explain your sources.
Balance: Everything is pretty well balanced. Good work!
It looks like you have about 5% of your paper quoted. That's a good
balance!

Answer 1

I did notice that in paragraph 4, while you presented opposing viewpoints(sources and your own logical ideas for opposition), the paragraph wasmostly evidence. You refuted your Smith source in one sentence; I wouldwork toward fully addressing every opposing concept fully for argumentstrength and for balance, so that your voice is the loudest one.