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People in the U.S. are generally happy. The first reason that makes people happy is that they are safe. Some people live in a house or an apartment alone without any family members because the place that they are living have security guarde and security cameras. Security gardes control the safety of that building and they stay outside for 24 hours. People also go outside at night for dinner or a walk even if they are alone. For example, if a woman or a girl goes outside for a walk at night, their family will never worry about them because they know that the place that she is going to is safe and security guarde is in everywhere for people safety. The second reason that makes people happy is that they have freedom. In the U.S. people do not care about clothes. They wear any type of clothes, short, long, old or new clothes. No one judges each other because of clothes or how they look like. For example, if I wear the short T-shirt at the Mall shop, people don’t care about my clothes because they wear same clothes. People also have freedom of sexuality and identity. In the U.S people who identify as transgender have the freedom to change their gender. For example, men can transition to a woman or a woman can transition to a man. In addition, people are also free to have same sex marriages. In the U.S. everyone has the freedom to live the way they want and no one can judge others. The third reason that makes people happy is that they get support and help from the government. Government helps families by giving them money or food. families get EDD, Cash Aid and food Stamp to buy groceries and clothes for them. Sometimes they help people to find a job by employment programs to hiring them for different jobs to take care of their family. The government also helps teenegers and adult students with their school or college. For example, the government covers classes by Financial Aid for adult students in the college so they don't have to pay money for classes. Another program pays money for books, transportation and other things. Some students have free lunch so they can eat food.

How to end my paragraph with a Concluding idea for readers to remember?

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Conclude it by saying and that’s why Americans are happy
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