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Where is the suspense?

Define of Suspense - a state or feeling of excited or anxious uncertainty about what may happen

Where is the suspense? Define of Suspense - a state or feeling of excited or anxious-example-1
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Answer:

1st paragraph is very suspensful

Step-by-step explanation:

Everything was automatic now down the steps to the cellar

  • the girl is scared of the cellar, she went into auto pilot mode and did what she only needed to grab

the light switch, the deep freeze

  • it's cold in the cellar
  • the light switch probably didn't work

the hand inside the cabinet

  • she doesn't know what will be inside of it
  • its poorly lit inside

taking hold of the first object it met

  • she didn't care what she grabbed. she wanted to get out of the cellar

she lifted it out and looked at it. It was wrapped in paper, so she took off the paper and looked at it again

  • she didnt realize what she grabbed. Only that she grabbed something. The cellar was probably poorly lit.
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