Question

Diana woke up on an oddly warm winter day. She ran down the stairs. She quickly ate her breakfast. She headed out the door. She went to her friend Mellissa’s house to work on their act for the talent show. She loved to dance. She knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show. She was ready.” What is the issue with this creative writing?

A. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
B. There are no issues
C. It needs to be proofread
D. It is full of clichés

Answer 1

Answer: A. It lacks a variety of sentence structure

Explanation: v

Answer 2

The answer is A - “it lacks a variety of sentence structure.” :)