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Hi I’m Evon and I’m going to tell you about Disney World. It is a very expensive place that requires a mask. A very large percentage of people like Disney World. Liberty Square doesn't have any bathrooms. If you don’t wear a mask you will get kicked out. I have not been to Disney world.

Disney World is a magical place. There is good wifi at Disney World. Disney World doesn’t sell gum. There are almost 30,000 hotel rooms around Disney world. You are never 30 steps away from a trash can.

There are cathlic churches at disney world. There are alot of Mickey ears. Their castles aren't as big as you think! I wanna go to Disney world. To see all their magical rides. American flags are required to be raised, and lowered. There are dead people burried at Disney world.

Disney world is alot of fun! There are alot of rides. Sharon Mae is Walt Disney's daughter. Roy E is his son. People love turkey legs.
what do you think?

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Disney is very fun but is very expensive

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User Melv
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In the 3rd and 4th paragraph you forgot to capitalize world!
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