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How can you revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence

patterns? Dogs make wonderful pets, golden retrievers are especially
friendly. I have two golden retrievers; both are very sweet. My parents
have greyhounds, they are a bit more nervous than my dogs.
Select one:

Add more independent clauses.

Shorten all of the sentences.

Remove some independent clauses.


Expand the topic to include cats.

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