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Thomas has included an extraneous sentence in the fifth paragraph (sentences 20-24). Which

sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?
A Sentence 20
B Sentence 21
C Sentence 22
D Sentence 23

2 Answers

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Answer:

D. Sentence 23

Step-by-step explanation:

Deleting sentence 23 removes an extraneous detail since the writer’s love of “freshly cut grass” is irrelevant to the revival of the basin and the rest of the paragraph.

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Answer: D

Explanation: I had this question before

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