Answer:
put a comma after but and 2042. Instead of the would founded use found. "I work at a daycare where I watch kids and entertain them or play with them" take out "or play with them" your just repeating yourself in that sentence. instead of "their name is Kate" put "her" because Kate is one person she isn't plural. put a comma after tuna. "sometimes me and the kids would play fun games like for an example heads up seven up" put a semicolon after games, take out "like for an example" and put "we woul play heads up seven up". "Every year at the daycare" put a comma after daycare.
I corrected half the page for you, I don't have time to look at the rest hope this helps