Question

Reading Johnson misuses drugs Johnson was a ten-year-old boy from Lagos. While he was in school, he kept bod company. He mode some bod friends. His friends were pupils from other schools who were much older than he was. Soon he joined his bod friends to smoke marijuana. One day Johnson was very sick. He was really suffering. So his mother took him to the hospital to see the doctor. Johnson said to the doctor, "They told me that the drug seller came to the school gate daily and they bought them from him very cheaply. I was using my pocket money to buy it.' He also told the doctor that he had been smoking cigarettes and sniffing paint fumes. The doctor told him that he should never take marijuana or cigarettes, nor toke any medicine that hod not been prescribed by a doctor. The doctor also advised Johnson's mother to keep all medicines away from him. Johnson took the doctor's advice and stopped using bad and dangerous drugs, and never had bad friends again.

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Answer 1

I think it's good in nature! in the sentance where the doctor is telling the kid not to do drugs you misspelled "take" as toke, and "had" as hod. I also don't know what a "bod"? is? but besides that it had a solid message! :)