I need help knowing the error for this sentence. "Altogether shark attacks get a lot of attention, this"

Nariman asked Jul 10, 2022

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I need help knowing the error for this sentence.

"Altogether shark attacks get a lot of attention, this"

Nariman asked Jul 10, 2022

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Answer:

It would be

Altogether, shark attacks get a lot of attention.

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Becca Petrin answered Jul 16, 2022

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