Read the draft of Diego's editorial.
Every school provides extracurricular activities like clubs and sports for its students. The problem is that students have a wide range of
Interests. Not all students can find something to do that suits them. I believe that our school administration should conduct a survey asking
students to suggest new activities.
This is important because the survey would show students that their opinions count. That makes them feel valuable. A survey would also
provide the principal and teachers with information about the students. That could help them to understand the students better.
The survey might result in some new activities. Then students would see that expressing their opinions really can make a difference. Adding
activities would also give the students a chance to learn about different topics. The school could have clubs for everything from crocheting to
studying the stars
In other words, the survey would help everyone. Teachers would learn more about their students. Students would learn about new subjects.
Best of all, they would have more to do and would be more excited about school. The school should absolutely take the survey. This survey is
Important to our school.
Diego wants to add a detail to his draft.
Which sentence would best maintain the draft's current style?
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O 1. Our school has to get real about student clubs.
02. I will suggest a club for building model airplanes.
O 3. Feeling valuable will likely lead to improved interest in academics.
4. Few teachers realize that some kids like to croche