Question

Just read this over to see if this sounds good. It's my intro paragraph. Give me some insight if I need to change anything. Like my thesis or something.

People of the past and present judge each other by their class. This could relate to how much wealth they have as well as their social class or economic status. These judgements separate us as a society and live our lives around these judgments. Class in simple words is a group of people or things categorized by the quality and economic status. This relates to the novel "The Great Gatsby" by some of the characters in the novel such as Tom and Daisy Buchanan.

Answer 1

i think its really good but u might want to some commas on some parts but thats all

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Answer 2

I think it's very well written! Great Job!

Although maybe be a little more descriptive in your last sentence (your thesis I'm guessing)

Write a personality trait that corresponds with your claim for Tom and Daisy. Why are they judgemental?

Is Daisy snobbish or rude?

Is Tom arrogant or bigoted?

It'll help make the claim more powerful.

Hope this helps! :)