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I eyed him.apprehensively. He had small eyes, rather large ears and a flat nose. He showed his teeth when he smiled. His hair was neatly combed. He wore shoes and he had no socks. His trousers seemed too short and his shirt too large. He greeted us. He had a pleasant voice. He was to be our new Science teacher​

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Answer: Adjust to context if needed, but this is what I came up with. Hopefully it helps.

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I scanned him apprehensively. My eyes met his small but edifying eyes; he had large, alert ears. As he beamed, I could practically see his paper white teeth sparkle. His hair was precisely combed but wore no socks with his shoes. His trousers seemed too short and his shirt too large. I heard his warm voice as he greeted us then, I knew, he was our new science teacher.

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