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Please review this song that I am writing. Thank you

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I am fight alone tonight.
wondering if I am going to get through the fight.
running around the battlefield
hopping ill survive
Cause I am fighting alone!
with no body by my side
hopping ill survive

But at that moment people start helping me to night
cause I was wondering if id survive!
through the night
cause I am fighting alone tonight.
with nobody by my side
wondering if I will win the fight.

oh, oh, oh, oh.
hoping to win the fight.
trying to survive
on my own tonight
all on my own
hoping to survive

hoping ill to survive the war.
the war
the war
hoping to survive the war.
cause tonight I am fighting alone!
with no one by my side

wondering if ill survive
cause I am fighting on my own tonight!
trying to get through the nigh
trying to win the fight.
hoping ill to survive the war.
the war
the war
hoping il survive he war.
cause I am fighting alone!
with no one by my side
trying to survive the night.

User Abdullah Shah
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2 Answers

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11 votes

okay! sound good >_<

User Truong Dang
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Answer:

it sounds good, im sure it sounds good when you sing it

User Molfar
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