Question

QUESTION 12

How could the following paragraph be improved?
• Jack and Jill ran. They ran up the hill. Then, they fell down, Jack hurt his leg Luckily, it did not break. After that, jack went home.
They did not run up the hill again.
By fixing the run-on sentences
By fixing the fragments
By varying sentence length
By varying sentence beginnings
How could the following paragraph be improved

Answer 1

Jack and Jill ran up the hill. Then, they fell down and Jack hurt his leg. Luckily, it did not break. After that, Jack went home and they Jack and Jill did not run up the hill again.