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Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph?

There was a monkey on a rocket ship. The rocket ship flew
over the irrigation ditch. The monkey was eating papayas.
A. There was a monkey eating papayas on a rocket ship. The rocket
ship flew over the irrigation ditch.
B. While eating papayas, the monkey flew over the irrigation ditch on
a rocket.
C. There was a monkey on a rocket ship, which flew over the
irrigation ditch and the monkey was eating papayas.
D. There was a monkey on a rocket ship, which flew over the
irrigation ditch. The monkey was eating papayas.

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Answer:

answer is B

[b]. While eating papayas, the monkey flew over the irrigation ditch on

a rocket.

Step-by-step explanation:

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