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Hi! would it be correct if i said

"the components of our solar system consists of our star, the Sun, and everything bound to it by gravity"

I'm not looking for punctuation corrections but just if it sounds right or something like that :>

User Robert Moskal
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Answer:

The components in our solar system consist of the stars, the sun, and everything bound by gravity.

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Yes, it sounds ok. But I think ‘the components of’ is unnecessary. You can just start by saying ‘the solar system consists of…’.
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