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Correctly rewrite each of these sentences:

Even though my test was almost finished.
People who like TV.
We did not finish the work, we were paid anyway.
I really like reading, it relaxes me.
I wanted to see the whole story it was very exciting.
Tom walked everywhere when he visited New York City there was no place left unseen.

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Answer:

Know that there are MANY ways* to "correct" these sentences, e.g., .... * adding, deleting, changing punctuation

* adding, deleting, changing clause order

* adding, deleting, changing clause content

* adding, deleting, changing clause conjunctions/conjunctive adverbs

I simply have chosen the method that first popped into my head.

Even though my test was almost finished, I tore it up and left the testing room.

People who like TV often spend up to 8 hours per day watching it.

We did not finish the work, but we were paid anyway.

I really like reading; it relaxes me.

I wanted to see the whole story. It was very exciting.

Because Tom walked everywhere when he visited New York City, there was no place left unseen.

Step-by-step explanation:

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