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Ritva looked at the other students. The Student Council had just announced their decision to remove her from the Treasurer position. She was surprised at the announcement. She had no idea that they had discovered her misplacement of Council funds. Ritva felt a lump of sadness in her throat at the thought of leaving the Student Council. How could they do this to me?

Revised paragraph

Ritva glared at the other students. The Student Council had just announced their decision to fire her as Treasurer. She was furious at the announcement. She had no idea that they had discovered her theft of Council funds. Ritva felt of lump of resentment in her throat at the thought of leaving the Student Council. How dare they do this to me?

What effect does the author's word choice have on the revised passage?
A.
The reader is sympathetic toward Ritva's unfair situation.
B.
The reader is persuaded to vote for Student Council members.
C.
The reader learns that Ritva is being framed for a crime.
D.
The reader feels unsympathetic toward the main character.

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answer is d i think hope this helps
User Almund
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I Believe the answer is The reader feels unsympathetic toward the main character.

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