Question

Next POEM, once again don’t be afraid to tell me if you don’t like or what I could change because I do want your help. Especially this one.... Called no one is here.

Stop covering your pain
Because it only fades you away
Stop blaming your pain on people because it is never the same
Stop hiding that beautiful smile and no it’s not because your emotions wanna hide it for awhile
They may try to hurt you don’t let them
They’ll stop shoot because there is nothing to shoot
You’ll stop crying because there is nothing to cry about
Your friends now
Well turn around because they talking about you right now
Even your shadows go away in the dark
People say there for you
But then they gone
People say they love you
but they straight wrong
They say they won’t snitch
But they snitch and think they strong
They say “I’ll help you when you need it”
But when I ask for help they say “beat it”
They say they gonna ride but they wasting my time
I thought they were gonna stick by my side
But no is here
IT IS ALL LIES

Answer 1

This is a really nice poem! Keep up the great work :)

Answer 2

Hi!

Step-by-step explanation:

There are a few grammatical errors but besides that the poems great!

I relate to this poem a lot so thanks for reminding me I'm not alone!