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Idenify the error that needs to be corrected. Options:

redundancy

improper pronoun case

incorrect word choice

double pronoun indicator

adverbs value. adjective

The individuals holding the petion asked my husband and I to sign the petition.

She and he they loved good jazz concerts at the Morton Symphony Center in downtown Dallas.

The blade of my Girl Scout knife cut smooth through the pine as I carved a small totem pole.

"Breath, breath," yelled the rescue worker to the man trapped by the rubble of an earthquake.


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The individuals holding the petion asked my husband and I to sign the petition. (redundancy)

She and he they loved good jazz concerts at the Morton Symphony Center in downtown Dallas. ( double pronoun indicator)

The blade of my Girl Scout knife cut smooth through the pine as I carved a small totem pole. (adverbs value. adjective)

"Breath, breath," yelled the rescue worker to the man trapped by the rubble of an earthquake. (incorrect word choice)

Disclaimer: I am not 100% certain of these answers. Hope this helps.

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