Question

Read the passage. Then rewrite it to correct any mistakes in spelling and usage.

Passage
When choosing an instrument, its especially important to select one that you actually enjoy
playing. I have a friend whose learning the tuba, which she thought was really cool at first
because it was so big. She never really enjoyed playing, though, and now she has to except the
fact that practicing is just another chore sho's stuck with. If you enjoy your instrument, that joy
will come out in your playing and you'll be able to effect other people in a positive way with
your music. You can choose an instrument for it's price or popularity, but I think it is most
important to consider how happy it makes you.

Answer 1

When choosing an instrument, it's especially important to select one that you actually enjoy playing. I have a friend who's learning the tuba, which she thought was really cool at first because it was so big. She never really enjoyed playing though, and now she has to accept the fact that practicing is just another chore she's stuck with. If you enjoy your instrument, that joy will come out in your playing and you'll be able to affect other people in a positive way with your music. You can choose an instrument for its price or popularity, but I think it is most important to consider how happy it makes you.