Question

Search for information on the Internet to support your thesis. Make sure the content comes from reliable sources. The content should also clearly relate to your thesis statement. You can also create some multimedia elements of your own. Describe the supporting content that you will include in your multimedia presentation.

this is the thesis: The theme of "The Queen Bee"by Carl Ewald was on Hard Work. This is because, the other bees wanted not to work for the farmer but to go out there in the field for other things but was called back by the Queen bee. She ended up assigning them jobs on what to do thereby keeping them busy rather than idle.

Answer 1

The grammar needs to be fixed a bit.

Step-by-step explanation:

Delete "this is the thesis:", it doesn't need to be explained before being said. There should be a space after "The Queen Bee", which I'm sure was just a typo. Don't capitalize Hard Work. Delete the comma after because. The rest is good, I would say try answering the questions as much as you can, getting a bigger paragraph in. Good job!