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Can anybody help me make this sound more professional…

“Hello my name is Felipe Frauches i am 17 years old and I’m a senior at centennial highschool I have recently broke one my friends windshields by exploding a confetti gun inside of her car I hope to make quick buck by helping around your house! I can provide power washing moving heavy objects or even landscaping if needed please contact my at this number”

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Hi my name is Felipe Frauches I am 17 years old, I am a senior at Centennial High School. I recently broke my friends windshield by exploding a confetti gun inside of her car. I hope to make some quick bucks by helping around your house! I can provide Power Washing, Moving heavy objects, or even Landscaping if needed. If in need of any of these following things, Please feel free to contact me at this number.

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This way sound much professional and a polite way to get you getting money fast. I hope this helps you!

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