Question

I NEED HELP!! How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style?

A) Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence
B) Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly
C) Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas
D) Maintain a formal style

Answer 1

A because it’s needs to be more clarified.

Answer 2

I think that Clarifying the topic and purpose in the topic sentence (A).