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There are 8 comma errors Dear mom

I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent the backstroke play foursquare and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond Virginia and Michael is from Cleven land Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday:June 23 2009. Anyway I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.
Your son
Jack

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Dear mom

I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent the backstroke play foursquare and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond Virginia and Michael is from Cleven land Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday:June 23 2009. Anyway I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.

Your son

Jack

Ok that´s the original. Here is it fixed.

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Dear Mom,

I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent, the backstroke, play foursquare, and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond, Virginia and Michael is from Cleveland, Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday: June 23, 2009. Anyway, I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.

Your son,

Jack

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