Question

Any advanced writers out there? I need some input. This story is a continuation of The Cask of Amontillado by Edgar Allen Poe.

"How lonely a man would be with no spouse, nor comrade. A lack of companionship, a lack of interaction. That man is I. But still; the revenge that was forced upon the man that mocked and injured me, a thousand times, is still stirring. The deed that was done, has not left my mind. It can’t rest. Only once it had. Dearest Viventium fell and passed … the woman was one thing I truly cherished.
I felt sick. It was the walls; the cold, dark, dripping walls. Nothing more.
My son Filius and his family came to visit me, in a surprise ambush. I had not seen Filius since his mother died. I wasn’t prepared for their arrival at all. Everyone in town remembers me as the lonely old man, so when word got around that my son was staying, the town's people were a little shocked."
How would I continue this story? I don't want you to write the rest, I just want some feedback and ideas.

Answer 1

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I would say you could like mention more about the reaction(s) of the townspeople and things about the building to stretch it. Like when you said the townspeople were a little shocked you could add something like "One lady may have even seemed she was going to faint" or sum like that. and about the building, you could say that everything was making you sick, the house itself? Or just add more details. But, tbh its really good and doesnt really need any work

Answer 2

well you could tell them more about where the son was and what he was doing that whole time and make it like he's talking to his dad

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