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Can you revise my essay and tell me the errors in it.

Can you revise my essay and tell me the errors in it.-example-1
Can you revise my essay and tell me the errors in it.-example-1
Can you revise my essay and tell me the errors in it.-example-2
User Ankur Soni
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Answer:

U did amazing work but is ejjit part of the paragraph?

Explanation: I like your essay it's really awesome!

User Aderbal Farias
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For the conclusion make it like this|

In conclusion Tam Lin...
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