The excerpt lacks specificity and credibility by not providing a clear source or date for the statistic on hunger-related deaths.
How does the excerpt violate the guidelines?
The excerpt violates the guidelines for using supporting materials by lacking specificity and precision. While it mentions a statistic from the World Health Organization, it fails to provide a specific source or date for the information, which undermines its credibility.
Proper citation and timely references are crucial for establishing the reliability of supporting materials, and the excerpt could benefit from specifying the year and source of the provided statistic for a more convincing argument.