Question

Identify why each of the following topic sentences is not effective. Then, choose the word or words from the list that best describes each problem. (They can have more than one problem). Lastly, revise each sentence.

4. Competition is good.
Problem:
Revision:

5. I think that homework is unnecessary.
Problem:
Revision:

6. Diseases have killed many people.
Problem:
Revision:

Answer 1

4. Problem: Lack of specificity.

Revision: Healthy competition fosters growth and innovation across industries.

5. Problem: Lack of support or evidence.

Revision: I believe homework might be reconsidered for its necessity based on its effectiveness in enhancing learning.

6. Problem: Lack of detail and generality.

Revision: Throughout history, various diseases have tragically claimed countless lives due to their devastating impact on public health.