The sentence has a misplaced modifier: "in bedroom slippers."
Rewritten sentence: A little girl was walking in bedroom slippers, and she had her dog with her.
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Original Sentence: A little girl was walking her dog in bedroom slippers.
Misplaced Modifier: in bedroom slippers
Rewritten Sentence: A little girl was walking her dog while wearing bedroom slippers.
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