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Which is better ? " On December 23, 1867, in Delta, Louisiana, Sarah Breedlove was born. " or " Sarah Breedlove was born on December 23, 1867, in the Louisiana village of Delta. "
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Which is better ?

" On December 23, 1867, in Delta, Louisiana, Sarah Breedlove was born. "
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" Sarah Breedlove was born on December 23, 1867, in the Louisiana village of Delta. "

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The second one is definitely better
User Rgoldfinger
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The 2nd one is better
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