Question

"On December 23, 1867, Sarah Breedlove was born into a village known as Delta, Louisiana."

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Answer 1

Sarah Breedlove, who was born in a village,Delta, Louisiana on December 23,1867.

Answer 2

Answer: Sarah Breedlove was born on December 23, 1867, in the Louisiana community of Delta.

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