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we dont write a paper at the end of a research process instead we write our way into a paper we write bits and pieces that make up the first draft we write our way through problems we document our journey as a researcher writer what we dont use in the final product we throw away because we know that for the next project well begin again by writing to find out what we think in this way we write to discover to explore and to learn

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We don't write a paper at the end of a research process. Instead, we write our way into a paper. We write bits and pieces that make up the first draft. We write our way through problems. We document our journey as a researcher-writer. What we don't use in the final product, we throw away, because we know that for the next project, we'll begin again by writing to find out what we think. In this way, we write to discover, to explore, and to learn.

(P.S: If you have written this for an essay by yourself, try to reduce the amount of times you say 'we', instead, use other phrases or introduce semi-colons etc. such as this: "

We carefully construct the initial draft by assembling various components, while simultaneously addressing and overcoming encountered obstacles in the process." instead of "We write bits and pieces that make up the first draft. We write our way through problems."

Yes, it is wordy but it shows complex structures in an academic perspective which will gain marks!!)

Hope this helps!!!

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